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Batman- The Return of Damian Wayne Part II by Dkalban Batman- The Return of Damian Wayne Part II by Dkalban
Plot Outline: fav.me/d5wtq9i
Part I: fav.me/d6et8mz
Part III: fav.me/d6ne0uz
Part IV: fav.me/d6ojmep
Part V: fav.me/d6qbn8d

Damian Wayne's road home after resurrection continues. Now traveling with the eccentric rich teen J. Bowden Hapgood and his bodyguard Brighton; Damian will have to contend with two of the Seven Men of Death; the League of Assassins' most feared killers, who are under orders to bring back Damian as intact as possible. From the streets of Hong Kong to the bustling markets of New Delhi; Damian and his new associates will have to defeat and outwit killers who are devoted to Talia Al Ghul.

As I mentioned in a recent journal; this will be a five part series.

And I'm surprised I kept this to 34 pages (as a comic); I thought for sure this would be much longer.

And to paraphrase a line said at the Passover seder: NEXT ISSUE, IN JERUSALEM! :XD:

Damian Wayne, Batman, et al belong to DC Comics

Preview image art by Patrick Gleason from Batman and Robin #1 (Sept 2011)

"J" and Brighton belong to me, though "J"'s present alias is inspired by a character from Anyone Can Whistle, one of Sondheim's rare flops.

Script and Story belongs to me as well.
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The-Middnite-Hawk Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this is really good, really good. But if you are going to suggest this to the comic book nerds at dc comics then you might want to do more research. Damian Wayne was actually the fifth robin, not the fourth. I don't mean to nitpick, nor do I intend to insult your intelligence, I just don't want you to get embarrassed for making a slight mistake. Other than that, I really enjoyed it. It is just a fantastic idea. I myself am thinking of introducing a new robin, because, tho I loved damian, I also believe everything great must come to an end, to make way for something even better.
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Dkalban Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.

As of the New 52, Stephanie Brown was never Robin. I'm working in the present Continuity.

oh? Interesting
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The-Middnite-Hawk Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh yeah forgot about that little detail. I still don't see why they changed that. There could've been so much more to work with.
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Dkalban Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think it was to simplify things, and they still got timeline issues sadly
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The-Middnite-Hawk Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah... u its sad, too, that they took her away, especially the whole story during which she was introduced and following that. It was really a good story to be able to read
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Dkalban Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think she's around somewhere
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The-Middnite-Hawk Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I mean they cant really just remove her from batman mythos.
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Dkalban Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
true. Plus there are collections if you want to read her adventures, and DC's digital comics have her backissues
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Rouge-Fox Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student Writer
This is fantastic, good sense of action, arrogance and the toilet bit had me in stitches, and batman is coming for his kid eh...oh those assassins will have hell to pay
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Dkalban Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D

Oh yes, once everything meets in Gotham, its gonna be nuts
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