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Batman- The Return of Damian Wayne Part V by Dkalban Batman- The Return of Damian Wayne Part V by Dkalban
Plot Outline: fav.me/d5wtq9i
Part I: fav.me/d6et8mz
Part II: fav.me/d6ilxmz
Part III: fav.me/d6ne0uz
Part IV: fav.me/d6ojmep

THE GRAND FINALE!!!

Damian Wayne is finally back in Gotham, but will he survive Talia's last desperate attempt to take him back? Will Batman ever have his son again? And who exactly is J. Bowden Hapgood? ALL WILL BE REVEALED!

This was an awesome experience and thank you for being on this ride with me :D

Unfortunately, as I pointed out in a recent journal, I didn't realize that at the end of Batman Incorporated #13 that Ra's stole Talia and Damian's bodies.

However, I can write an addendum later with Talia stealing something to help with the ritual.

DC, feel free to call ;)

Damian Wayne, Batman, et al belong to DC Comics

Preview image art by Patrick Gleason from Batman and Robin #1 (Sept 2011)

"J" and Brighton belong to me
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CartoonWatch Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
you are a great writer ! feel like im reading a batman comic  keep up the good work:)
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Dkalban Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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Rouge-Fox Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student Writer
I am in a mixture of AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw and OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH. I know emotions are not easy for Damien to show or sometimes comprehend, I remember reading in Batman and Robin volume 2 he said his mother was dead to him after she put 500 million on his head...of course it's never easy when your mum is a super criminal and your dad is a super hero. On the whole I thought the emotional reunion was okay, maybe a little overplayed here and there but given it was a return from the grave we can forgive what may seem an overdose of sentiment and simply accept we got our Robin back. Now as for Joseph, not bad indeed...he seems to have played the part of the spy rather well and perhaps gained a boost to his ego too, nice to see he is capable enough to survive the ninja apocalypse heh.
So on the whole a good ending to a good story, nice work my friend.
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Dkalban Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
And that's the reaction I wanted :D

Nope, the little demon brat has a hard time expressing emotions; so when he does you know its big.

Yep, his ego probably went up a few levels. And to be fair he only survived because he was sneaky and managed to hide himself. Plus he got in one last dig at Damian before departing the park.

Thanks :D

Now, with Damian likely to be coming back this summer (according to rumors), at least I won't have to worry about adjusting the intro arc to make it fit XD
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Rouge-Fox Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student Writer
Good show old boy, and we all look forward to Damien's return...and they better not even think of killing him off again!!

Also I will be up for noting tomorrow, I'm reading all the bits of yours today
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Dkalban Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yep, and I agree!

Okay :) I got a Young Justice tale brewing in my brain
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Rouge-Fox Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student Writer
Oooh goodo
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Dkalban Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, gonna be a LONG one as I'll be interspersing plumbing the depths of Joseph's "mind palace" with the JLA discussing his fate; though I could cut the latter part
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Rouge-Fox Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student Writer
Right gotcha
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Dkalban Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, so ill get cracking on that in a bit
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