This is a revised version version of [link]
with certain things changed or expanded upon.
I did this so I could practice turning what I've already written into scripts for comic books (so I can show any DC editor a sample of my work in official style)
Since its the first thing I re-wrote in official style it might be somewhat rough around the edges but Im getting used to the style
The idea is this would be an early issue of a Ronin solo comic and it would be early on in his career as a Gotham crimefighter
If you want to take a stab at adapting it to actual images (for practice, etc), feel free to let me know.
Ronin/Joseph Kane belongs me
Batman, Man-Bat, et al belongs to DC Comics